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Warm-heartedandhelpfulperson

MyfriendTinaisaWarm-heartedandhelpfulgirl,whosavedaboyfromfreezeriverwithherdog.

Notlongago,Tinawastakingherdogforawalknearariver,whileshewaswalking,shesawaboyplayingonthebridge.“Howdangeroushenboywas!”Tinathought,meanwhile,theboyfellintotheriver,andwithoutmorethought,Tinajumpedintotherivertohelptheboyleftdangerousaway.Unfortunately,inthatthecoldwater,Tinawasseizedofpanicanymore,“Oh!god,saveus!”Tinaprayed,andthen,thelegendreallyhappened!Herdog,allofasudden,jumpedintotheriverandtouchthemout!

Atlast,Tinaandthatboybothweresafty.WecanlearnfromTinawithherbravery,herhelpful,andherwarm-hearted,andTinasaidintheend:“Helpingpeopleisresponsibleofus!ForallIdon'thaveanyrepay,itmakesmefeelsosatisfied!”