问题描述:

高二英语作文求批改!

那位高人帮忙批改一下我的英语作文（一定要有批改）,

Self-introduction

MynameisY.S.H,Istudyinanarthighschool.Ilove

paintingverymuch,IhavebeenpaintingsinceIwasfiveyearsold.Myartteacher,MrsXuverylikeme,shealwayssaidtomethat“Ofveryfinequality!”or“Youareagenius”Idon’tthinkI’magenius,Ithinkit’sgenetic,becausemyfatherisacalligrapherandmygrandfatherisapaniter.

ExceptthatIhavenohabby.

I’mnotagoodstudent,becauseIalwaysfailinex-

-aminations,regardlessofMath,Englishorphysics.butIam

astudycommissionernow,butnotonlythatIhavejoinedS.U.Idon’tknowwhythis,I’mstillnotagoodstudent,

maybemyteacherwanttoencourageme.WhateverIwilltry

toimprovemyscore.