问题描述:

指出错误.并写一下小评语,感激不尽,

Ihaveafriendwhowasmyclassmate.Herfatherisapliceman.Soherfatheralwaysnotathome,hermothertakesherseriously.Shealwayssignedandtoldmethatshehadabadluck.Iaskedthereason.shetoldmethathermotheristooserioustolimither,shecan'tplaycomputer,cellphoneandreadyouthnovel.shecan'tgooutonweekends.ifsomeonecalledher,hermotherwouldaskhim/herabouthis/herscoreandfamily.Tworstthingashermotherwouldcheckherbagandroomwithoutherperimt.Allthethingshermotherdonemadeherfeltashamedandsorrowful.Shethoughtthatshewasoldenoughtodealwithherlifebuthermotherforbidden.Shethoughtitwasabadlucktohavesuchamother."Youaresolucky,yourparentswouldnotforceyoutodoanything,theyrespectyouropinionsandwouldnotcheckyourbagandroom,theygivesyouyourprivatespace.Itistruth,Ihadnoideatocomforther."Iwanttohavesuchparents,too!"Atthatmoment,Ithoughtaboutmyfamily.EverydayIbackhome,myfatherwouldwaitformeatdoorway,momhasprepareaverydeliciousdinner.Howwarmitis.Ilookedintohereyes.Ontheonehand,Ithoughthermotherislovinghersomuchthatcannotcontrolherconcern.Iaskedher,"whynotthinkaboutreasonyourmotherdonethese?""why?"Shewasconfused."Becauseoflove",shewasshockedandseemedlikecan'tbelieveit."ButIdon'tthinksheusedarightway.Maybeyoucantalktoher,makeherknowmoreaboutyouandrealizeyou'reaadult."Isaid."Comparewithsomeorphans,youraresolucky."Igaveherwordbackandsmiled.Whenwearebornintoworld,wearebeloved.Eveniforphans,theyhavechoicestoloveandtobeloved.Soluckyweare.Inmyopinion,"luck"justaword.Itdependsonmymind.